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Potion

Drunk with emotion
I want a potion
That'll make me better
And make me sing.

Drunk with emotion
There should be a lotion
That gets rid of
This unbearable feeling.

Drunk with emotion
I want a pill
Cosmetology experts
Send a bill
Make it quick
Fire it up
Get rid of this shit
It sure sucks.

Drunk with emotion
This could be a notion
Of how we're all supposed to feel.

Please, please, wishful zeal
Give me a break
Help me up
You sure as hell pushed me
Into that dump truck.

It's full of garbage
It's full of shit
I shouldn't have to be
Feeling this.

It's not right
It's not ok
Sometimes, you should feel gay
About the life you're supposed to have
You shouldn't be calling it some stupid fag.

Emotion
There should be a potion
That gets rid of it all.

Because without a notion
There'd be no notion
Of a feeling, oh devotion.

Author notes

I wrote this in the midst of a VERY, VERY deep low of depression. I like the way this turned out. Tell me what you think.

The double notion use in the last line WAS intentional, by the way. Just thought I'd clear that up.

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