He lost his senses in her skin, fair as chamomile,
her tiny movements captured awe, a graceful dance;
her sing-song voice rang with bells, and yet it whispered,
“just love me”.
He never lived a complex life, never had to-
simple things he were what desired, now he hasone.
Author notes
sorry, I'm just not good at insincere fluff...!
A contest entry
- A Spring Wedding - 14th March 2009 by Cannonsfire.
10000 points, ended March 10, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I am just going to sigh here
C
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Gorgeous.
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A lovely poem.....thank you so much. I love her very much.
Michael
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thanks, I have to do something with that background, however, I just realized it was from a horror-fantasy... lol
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I don't think I have to use many words but I'll try to make this as difficult as possible, hahahaha. Nahhhhhh...this was very pretty!
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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OMG This is gorgeous and just how I feel about him...I love him to bits...Thank you so much for this ~Luce
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