I miss my brother...
So many times I've carved his name
upon my wrists
just hoping it will free me
from some of the pain,
I feel so lost,
I don't know what to do,
it's been 8 months now
since I last saw him,
that last day I'll never forget,
the day he learnt to say my name,
the day my mother took him from me,
the day my mother left me with my uncle,
my abusive uncle.
all I have left of my brother
is a little blue teddy bear
that he used to sleep with.
I can't go on,
I need him,
I've lasted this long
but I give up,
I miss him too much.
A contest entry
- round contest number one (prewrite) by serenity silvermoon.
510 points, ended September 25, 111 entries
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HANG IN THERE MY DEAR!!!
All is as it is meant to be and God will bring both of you together again. That is what you live for, the time when you two see each other again! God will make it happen as he sees fit.
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wow sissy again i know how you feel it is not fun when a part of you is taken alot of us knows this feeling some how same way i love you and i hope you know i am always here for you
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Once again, so touching and very hard for you, everyday...
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you have such a sweet heart. My hope is that you will see him again. I'm sure you will!!
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Oh Babygirl,
This is heartwrenching.
My heart is breaking with these words!
It is hard to miss ones we love, take it from the expert on that... wow!
and lots of love
Mommy
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