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I never believed in you. Ever.



All my life, you were never there.
Ever.
Even after I cried your name.
You never showed up.
Ever.

 

Id rock out to cocaine, and
extacsy,
all this time you were callin' my name.
I never believed in you.
Ever.

 

Until recent events,

when all I could see was death.

You showed up, 

telling me you'll love me, forever and,

Ever.

 

I started to see,

what my friends wanted to show me

Everything that I was looking for

your love would never leave my grasp,

Ever.

 

Thank you Lord for everything,

that your grace has shown me,

I can honestly say,

I know your never going to walk out on me,

Ever.

 

All my life, until now,

you were a shadow,

I never bothered to look for

I never believed in you,

Ever.

 

I believe in you now,

God.

And I know that you'll be there

Forever.

 

 

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  • Oceanna
    July 6

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    I love the twist in this write.
    It's quite creative, and I loved the ending.
    I hope to find my 'Ever' someday too. =)


  • Poetess12
    April 23

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    This is an interesting poem. The emotion and realizing that God is there forever.

    You did a great job on your poem.

    Thank you for your entry.


  • darkyinsoul
    April 14
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    Speaks out with emotion. To find inner peace is hard. Thanks for the share.

  • I like what you had to say about going from not believing to believing. Nice poem. Thank you for your entry. God bless.
    Angel


  • Nicsnowdemon silver member
    March 22
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    thumbs up

    awsome great write good read

  • hh this is amazing. I felt it. awesome write!!!!!!

  • wow, this is a great poem. god will be there forever through the think and thin, im glad you believe in him!

    xx-charlotte-xx


  • OldBear34 silver member
    March 11

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    Powerful!

    Your poem powerfully projects the transition from being lost to being found in the arms of Jesus! Bravo!@


  • Denerica
    March 10

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    Brilliant, I love this write...the concept of your unbelief, to believing, how he would never leave. Blessings.


  • rinzurajan
    March 8

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    wow...that was such and honest confession...ur right...until we don't make an efforrt to find him we cannot ever find him...

    i loved ur poem...

    good luck

    God bless u

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