I heard a violin
singing on the wind,
it played an old song
that made me cry,
reminding me of the time
before I knew
the difference
between music and magic.
Closed my eyes
and for a heartbeat wept,
unable to hold onto moment
when they were the same.
A contest entry
- 20-50 words :) by Lady Michaella.
475 points, ended March 3, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
A violin played by a true artist can make you weep
The violinist is a magician to make those strings
really sing beautiful music. I love this poem -
wow!!! this is amazing.. beautiful imagery with the violin singing on the wind.. thats beautiful!
Thanks for entering my contest,
and best of luck to you!!
Your judge,
-Lady Michaella- -
Sad
very sad,tense a lot is said with so little words
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Wow, another captivating read. Well done. Best of luck in the contest..I think we have a winnner!
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Wow bubs. What a read this one is! I love it... I love the soft undertone in this one. You did great with it! wow!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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aw a wonderful write I like this Ibeing a musicion myself I can relate to your words good luck in the contestmaralisa
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A classical rendition to my guitar gently weeps, loved the feeling of the violin touching the soul, I don't know if you wanted to say Close me eyes or my eyes. Once again a wonderful write, friend. Blessings.
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