Sparkles of light
tiny and vibrant
with millions of smiles
then dissapear like a shooting star
when i stopped for breath
Sparks is gone like it should
Author notes
For Steven Charles Sparks, whom i saw only twice and liked his bright sparkling smile.
Please tell me what you think
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Fantastic
very cute and twinkling poem, well dont stop to breath again. wellcome Back
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Thank you Ahkam, appreciate it alot!xoxo
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Beautiful.
Very deep, and astronomical.
It was very intriguing, and deep.
It had a hidden meaning.
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This is fantastic! I love the way you chose to remember this person! Great job! You said a lot in such a short piece!
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What a beautiful way to remember someone, as a shooting star of sparkling light that takes your breath away. Oh how I've missed your perspectives Carolina. Well worth the wait. Rhonda
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Oh thank you Rhonda...just a guy a dated for a very brief time, but find him very polite and nice...glad meeting him although nothing happened. Thus, its just like shooting star, pleasant and beautiful last very brief, as brief as one inhale of breath.
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Short and sweet, great write
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Very good. A pleasure to read.
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