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lv...Thoughts Of You

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Awaken by the thoughts of you

it's then the sun starts to shine

and what is daylight without

special scenes brought to view

or any night in fearful darkness

unless I share my thoughts with you

 

Times we share in our private world

gratifies our heart and soul that special need

reeling our emotions high into the heavens

or dipping to the depth of our sexual greed

 

Leaving behind the shadows of darkness

above the horizon we both shall rise

remembering our thoughts of loves satisfaction

greeting daylight as the earth meets the sky

 

 

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  • DelaneyDisaster
    March 2, 2009

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    Very good. My favorite line was the last line. I liked it all, but the last was the best. A very good write. Good luck.


    • A floatingleaf silver member
      March 3, 2009
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      I watch the sun rise from my kitchen window, as I make my morning coffee...


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 2, 2009

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    Was love ever really like that? This is a super write but I never quite know what this feeling is all about. It is the way we would all like to feel with our partners I suppose or perhaps I have just become far too cynical. Sheila