Innocence ripped away for just a few damn dollars
tiny fragile bodies distorted from torturous hard labor
lives condemned to slavery, unable to escape their hell
death too good for those involved in this slaughter!
Author notes
I read these poems>
Sheer madness
Destroyer of Innocence!
Feels like Pain
5. Child Slavery Such a shame it is that adults tender children as a marketable product. We must find those who do and let them suffer slowly. Take their rights from them, disable their bodies and make them complete unbearable tasks.
A contest entry
- A Four lines' ~Stanza~ to break the WALL of voilence by The.poet.of.hearts.
999 points, ended March 23, 2009, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Yes tis' true, even though for some these monsters should answer to Mr. Death for the pain they wrought on others. Though it be better to see them rot behind bars of torment for the rest of their lives, thus they suffer longer than their victims. It's an age old argument, and one we could talk about forever. Your poem says a lot for one being so short, a poem that is both truthful and sad.
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this is a sad, unconscionable practice!
Congrats on the trophy!
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the reply was for Rheea, please don't mind
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more Nicely penned.
I give 76 out of 100
~Lets See Where the Cradle Break~
and really sorry for Judging this late, I was having my Midterm Exams
Wish you all the best of Luck
Thanks for ENtering
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you are the rebel who gave nothing you make me laugh
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