Ich Liebe Dich
more than life
Ich Hasse Sie
your such a jerk
Ich Liebe Dich
well that's no surprise
Fick Dich
stop smirking now
Ich Bewundere Sie Auch
it's just that precious smile
Ruck
Ha bet you don't speak German!
es Ist Vorbei
well at least this poem is...
Author notes
Ich Liebe Dich= i love you
Ich Hasse Sie= I hate you
Flick Dich= F***K you
Ich Bewundere Sie Auch= I adore you
Ruck= Jerk
es Ist Vorbei= It's over
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Comments
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Very unique and creative piece here
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i love it!
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Thank you for your entry good Luck in the contest
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Dancing poem
hiphop
very lovely write
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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HAHA i'm freakin cracking up right now!! when i clicked on it i expected it to be something toatlly serious....man you shocked me!!! this is freakin awesome!!
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aww
lol I can write mature but I'm pretty young so way be depressed? I was trying to find humor in heart break and was pretty easy
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brilliant collab of languages and the form was so cool! loved it. loved the theme too...made me laugh a little.
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very good.. i really loved how you used the german in it and it made me smile realizing the bad and good things about the man you are talking about
great penning
Love forever and always Ciara -
I liked this poem, I liked the way you have combined the german and english languages. Awesome and actually I do understand German
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So, I don't understand. If only I spoke german. Grumble.
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I lol'd, thanks.
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thanks
lol amazing what we can do with what we know and what the translator will give you
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this is an awsome poem. im taking german in my high school, so i actually knew what you were saying. awsome. Good luck in the contest.
Kaycee
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lmao
hm im sure u didnt learn the fowl parts in school lol
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so different, so fun
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Unique (:
Ok, this all a little confusing LOL
but it was very funny when i re-read it. I actually really like this, it is very different from what im used to, but it's amazing
"Ich Liebe Dich
well that's no surprise"
I love this line, cuz i can relate to it in so many ways....
GoodLuck (:
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i actually
Don't do very many bilingual ones so when i do i write them like this It's fun and helps me get things off my chest without people knowing that im cussing them out lol
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