pale skin
and cold
from your fingers to your toes
i can't get it out of my head
the way you looked
laying there-
lifeless,
leaving behind a world full of people
and an ocean of tears
there was standing room only
only you were missing from the crowd
missing
missing
missing you
Author notes
RIP Corey, old friend.
i can't get your face out of my head.
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This is sad but beautiful. I love it. Great write. Xds-gX
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leaving behind a world full of people
and an ocean of tears
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wow dep and intense
i love it
its very well written
i love it
and i am sorry about your loss
this is beautifully sad... -
....this.
this, this is powerful. very, very powerful
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Interesting.... It's sad.
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this is beautiful.
i'm sorry. -
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thank you.
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