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I Am

I am not shy but quite
I am full of life and drama
I am lost for words when it comes to
describing me
I am too sorry to care and to late to
wonder if i would ever find a man that
would fit into my life

who I am,
I am me
I am the lost souls of the four worlds
I am no one that you would ever meet in this
time.

I AM

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    March 14

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    Well this dillemma is the part which every one think every day..very thoughtful story again you asked and narrated as well...


  • Raivyn
    March 9

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    Hehe it's a mistake everyone makes darling, but it's "quiet" but excellent on it. Favourite of mine -- again heh.

  • mz.butter
    March 6
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    very good write


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 2
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    Fascinating write, dear. Had to read it twice. It really is a masterful piece.