Bleeding from the cuts
that your words have lashed
would not give justice
to the agony by which I
Asphyxiate
When you speak with poison dripping
upon every word, my ears gently sipping
while my heartbeat palpitates
I gradually
Asphyxiate
A massacre of what I called me
Simple annihilation due to a cherry bomb baby
Deceit fed to me through an IV
disguised as promises Cut from the feed,
slowly I decease and
Asphyxiate
Under a Pagan moon,
we used love and we used to swoon
until you told me a little too soon
I was doomed and that love was half fake
I feel my trachea tighten as I begin to
Asphyxiate
My sweet lullaby that was once your voice
Now batters my soul and grieves my poise
I was just another kitten among the toys
I should've known better than to play with little boys
but instead I suffer and quake
An early grave,
Asphyxiate
No breath is left, no heart to beat
No soul to fill, this meat bag titled me
has been corrupted and filthier still
I creep towards what was you and I without will
Choking, gasping, not even capable of hate
Asphyxiate
This emptied zombie, no longer a lovable creature
Is tonight's joy and feature!
You gather yourself with eyes of malice and glee,
Though it hurts so bad to see you smiling at the shell of me
The sight of you is bittersweet as I fall to my knees
shamefully I crawl, craving you to be my soulmate
Alas I fall,
Asphyxiate.
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Perfectly written. I can relate all too well to this one. Your emotions pour desperation, and the struggle to move on, not wanting to face any form of reality. Asphyxiation....Hope I can get there..lol...Once again. Very well written.
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I really like it!!
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well deserved of a gold trophy! congrats on the gold!!!
very well written write...filled with so much emotion...all of the agony of lost love when that love was feign, never real, and no longer returned....oh so much pain and torture is within this piece of yours...i'm so very glad you chose to share this write with the group...
feel free to share more of your pieces no matter what they are about...share everything that is you in this group...i want to see who you are...express yourself in every form! continue the great work!
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holy.......shit. ....... this blew my mind. simply amazing. the way it flowed and rhymed, i could see the whole thing going on in my head....just wow. it won't let me give you the number of little smiliey things this piece deserves, so i'll give you 3 and still owe you a million more.
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I really enjoyed this!
The rhyming and imagery was excellent. The words flowed wonderfully.
From beginning to the end was good. Great job and good luck!
Thanks for entering your poem.
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