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Hunger

 

 

The shadows haunted me

As I tried to act brave and

Tough walking down the

Dark covenants dungeons

 

Knowledge of what laid

Behind those doors coursed

Through my veins as if it

Were acid eating away at me

 

Screams could be heard

From every turn of a corner

Yet those poor souls willing

Gave their life away

 

Resentment filled me as I

Bit into my victim, I fully

Knew that I was killing her

Yet she had begged for it

 

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  • Catacomb
    March 9, 2009

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    I love , love, LOVE THIS!! Amazing imagery and I love the picture. 'I vant to suck your blood' - i love vampires. Thanx for commenting on my poem (i'm on my phone and i couldn't get to send you a msg) oh and btw, you're not morbid or wicked- if a vampire sucked my blood i would love to be his dark, immortal queen. Lol. Well done! Bs


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    March 1, 2009

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    Oh wow. Very nice take on the prompt! I love it! You've done a great job with this picture, and it is an excellent write.