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what number one?

I don't know what to say to you,
to make it simple,
it didnt matter,
when i said the things I said
cause words dont come out right,
when your around.
its not easy letting go
of everything around me
its all so goddamn pretty,
but its all so goddamn wrong.
Do you know
what to say when I look at you
that way?
Someone please tell me,
what happens when thats gone?
Im so ready for this to start,
but its already fadin to a dull
shade of red.

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this is about someone long ago, it wasnt put on paper like it should have been, he popped into my life awhile ago and i knew i had to do him justice.

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