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Forever, Love





I could fall asleep inside your love,
a sigh-- breathe in the colours of the day and we are one;
kiss away the stars with something brighter
I'll always hold the infinite abyss.

You walk inside the corridors of my heart,
dance along the pulse that butterflies sing into--
we are so sublime.

Imprint on me with celestial moons
you've creased inside my veins;
darkness smothers me with a warm light I never knew,
but cognition floods me now...

When I beat my wings inside this aqua dream
I am home





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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    April 17

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    This is another stunning piece, straight from the heart and it captures the way love makes you feel so perfectly. the high of being complete. Beautiful


  • Poetic Rage
    March 29

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    I love the Passion that is felt in this piece it is so raw but so true at the same time. Oh how love feels when it is so true can be the best high you could get. No pills or drug could ever take you that high nor would I want it to for love is the best!!!


    Great Write!!!

  • Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! ♥
    This. is. beautiful.
    It's so, so perfect, I don't know what to say.
    "kiss away the stars with something brighter"
    and "you walk inside the corridors of my heart" were my favourite lines, I just don't know how you people come up with things like that.
    Make sure you keep writing, you're very talented.
    -abi x x x