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Destructive Jesus

i am a god in a realm of mortals
i can stir the clouds with a twirl of my hands
i am a god in a realm of idiots
i can break a spirit with a snap of my fingers

within this ridiculous world of the juvinile
the decitful,
the vile,
within this horrible clash of the titans,
i can start a war with a glance

i hope this race can fully understand
what i can do, with a spill of the lips
i can do wonders for me and MY kind,
not this one that has been infecting my earth
for years to come.

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  • Nymphetemine
    March 3

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    Very interesting poem here. Its very deep and has one thinking ... Well done dear poet.
    Love and Light AngelofLight


  • L.Jay
    March 1
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    very interesting, i liked it alot