Tears fall as our lips
Touch one last time as
If our good bye wasn't
Enough to echo through
My brain, my heart-beat
Had to stop as our finger
Tips parted into eternity
Tears fall as our lips
Touch one last time as
If our good bye wasn't
Enough to echo through
My brain, my heart-beat
Had to stop as our finger
Tips parted into eternity
Author notes
I had to use a word list:
1. echo
2. heart-beat
3. lips
4. finger tips
5. tear
Picture credit: http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh137/reezethe/parted.jpg
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Amazing poem. really moving
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You have written a wonderful poem here. What wonderful word, I love the way you put them together.
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It takes great talent to be presented with just 5 words and put them together so delicately, yet so powerful. Amazing job!
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ssooo moving lost but not forgoten eternity is but a heart beat away.
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this is awesome! nice usage of the words yu had to work with!
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I just had to say goodbye to the boy i'm seeing and this how i felt. Though Im going to see Him tomorrow...tomorrow just seems so far away. You have a talent. Rock on.
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Awww very sad yet very good. This is such a touching write. I love it from the bottome of my heart.
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Aww very good. I like it. It reminds me of a song by Madina Lake. (love themm) the picture really works well with this. Good job.
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thank you
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dark and sweet,
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thank you
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