Dreamland

Life and death,

concepts thought over time.

No one knows the truth,

which is divine?

Heaven and hell,

thought to be real.

Some may fight,

some just feel.

The concepts none truly understand,

those of our own.

Nothing else,

but our selfish unknown.

So fight with each other,

about the matters at hand.

Fight with each other,

to create a dreamland.

-BrandieAngelique

Author notes

"...strange, there's so much religion in the world, but only enough to make us fight over what's right, not enough to make us love one another."
-Margaret Cho

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Can this be happening? by ciara12. 1350 points, ended March 9, 18 entries
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upperworld06
April 20
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awesome, the quote is amazing as well, thanks for entering
islekine
March 18
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I really enjoyed this!
Thanks so much for entering! Best wishes in the contest...and always! Write on!
piccola
March 8

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so many beliefs and yet only one God. How can all of them be correct? I think I understand this write (I think.) Thank you for entering the contest
Metaphorist
March 6

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Very nice. And thought-provoking. This part is great: “Some may fight, / some just feel.” It seems we start wars all to avoid questioning what is life and what is death. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck!
ciara12
March 6

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thank you for entering my contest i really liked this entry way to go
love forever and always
Ciara ann
LovelyLauren
March 6
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lovely
Thank you for your entry. It was a very nice read.