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The cold night

The Cold night I lay under the stars. Eating candy bars. Kissing under the moon Looking like a Baboon  licking Ice-cream off of a spoon. Talking on the phone hang it up because there is know one home. I twist up that a pretzel.

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  • maralisa silver member
    March 2
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    a nice write I like your imagery and depth thank you for sharingmaralisa