Clever sensations
invoke basic sexual
guilts. Carnal
anarchistic instincts scribed
radically and impulsively,
eviscerate otherwise
tame and
traditional sexual
etiquette.
Anatomy throbbing through foreign
sensations, she desperately struggles to
hold on to worn out past realities.
Enduring and genuine, new
sexual appetites are reluctantly pursued.
Author notes
based upon pic above:
http://strany.deviantart.com/art/But-I-Wanted-To-Touch-81814516
A contest entry
- Bored At Work Quickie!!! by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended March 1, 2009, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Yeah! Like the rawness and power of this! Wicked!
(If you uncaptialised the first letter in each line that isn't a new sentence, that would help with flow I think)

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Awesome.
Though you didn't say which you picked, that could have been for either one.



