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Appetite

Clever sensations
invoke basic sexual
guilts. Carnal
anarchistic instincts scribed
radically and impulsively,
eviscerate otherwise
tame and
traditional sexual
etiquette.

Anatomy throbbing through foreign
sensations, she desperately struggles to
hold on to worn out past realities.
Enduring and genuine, new
sexual appetites are reluctantly pursued.

Author notes

based upon pic above:

http://strany.deviantart.com/art/But-I-Wanted-To-Touch-81814516

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 1, 2009

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    Yeah! Like the rawness and power of this! Wicked!

    (If you uncaptialised the first letter in each line that isn't a new sentence, that would help with flow I think)


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 1, 2009
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    Awesome.
    Though you didn't say which you picked, that could have been for either one.