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The Mind

The mind is a terrible place to be
            Sometimes it will
          never let you be free
        It owns you,bends you
                  shapes you
          into what you are to be
        Your memories fade away
            like leaves on a tree
    It controls your every feelings
              and hopes to be
                So let me go
          so i can be forever free

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  • Majija
    March 8

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    I really like this poem of yours. You are right about the mind. Sometimes I feel that my mind is my biggest 'enemy' in life. It create often more problems than it solves - at least mine does.

  • hemingway
    March 1
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    I think its a good poem

    No one reads my poems anyway.The only way u can win anything on here is to have a lot of friends to vote for u.I don't have any friends.Thats not a way to run a contest either.The more friends u have the better chance u have to win...This site is for kids.