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The Trickster

Oh, ho!  mighty Kickaha
trickster and master thief extroadinaire
a tier of universal green skies
okeanos: garden of eden, amerind, talanac (dracheland), atlantis
and fabled beasts:
the great centaurs; of palaces in the sky
and great lords of all they surveyed
Oh! mighty Kickaha
where are you now?
lost among the tiers
as Jadawin seeks his way in shadow...

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  • Elrenia
    July 17
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    Perhaps a bit of background would benefit this. I do not get the references, either.


  • BearWoman gold member
    June 11

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    I like this piece (even though I do not know the referents). Thank you for writing for this contest.

  • ecrivain01
    March 1
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    Excellent start ...

    and I hope to see a lot more of it.