A babies mind is pure, untamed,
amazment. Totally unaltered by
the worlds mistakes and problems.
Author notes
Writen for a 15 word contest. About the pureness of a baby and how they are so unaware of the worlds problems. Also how a baby born into one family, can be totally different then the same baby born into another family.
A contest entry
- Quickie by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended March 1, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think, what should I change, what should I keep, what do you like, what do you hate?
Comments
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Aww.. That's all i'm thinking right now. This is good.. It really makes me wish i was still a baby.. So i can not know everything that's going on with this world.. Good job.
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This is a lovely poem for the prompt thank you for taking the time to enter my contest best wishes always be well.
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aw a beautiful take on the promt good luck in the contest
maralisa
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This is so sweet. I love it. So true!
Good luck in the contest. This should do very well.
Love,
Ylova
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