Perfection is tiring
she won't admit-
Perfect boyfriend
perfect grades
perfect game
perfect-
family
Does anyone know,
little girl?
Does anyone suspect,
little girl?
You don't know what
he's seen,
do you,
little girl?
You don't know how
he feels,
do you,
little girl?
You might never know;
Would you
regret it?
Would you
miss
what you
could have
had?
Would you want him
to know?
To be his
little girl-
~
He's not worth it
Keep telling yourself
He doesn't want me
He can't want me
It isn't right
You want him,
don't you?
You feel him,
don't you?
When you're alone-
In the quiet-
In your dreams...
In his arms...
Please, in his arms...
Does he dream of
your kisses, too?
He doesn't want me
He can't want me
It isn't right
I love him
"Katy, I love you--"
I can't listen
"Katy, I have to tell you--"
I can't listen
"Katy--"
Can't you see
this?
"The wrong way?"
Please don't-
"There is no wrong way-"
Please...
there is
Author notes
This was a quick thing, but I like it. One of my favorite little fantasies at the moment. This is about half of what I'd written that day, but it's the half I think has potential. What has this to do with society? Well, you tell me. It's in there, there's a specific line that more or less gives it away, if you're looking. It's two poems, but I don't want them seperated.
I need to know if this makes any sense. Any thoughts or questions are greatly appreciated.
PS: I think "Please don't make me/cry" sounds stupid. Me thinks it would sound better going directly to the next line. Thoughts?
Also (I know I'm talking a lot guys, I'm sorry) the seventh stanza ["You might never know;" etc] bothers me a lot. This entire poem is about the spacing, and I like the way it's done. But should that first line be seperated? ie:
"
You might never know;
Would you
regret it?
Would you
miss
what you
could have
had?
"
(Pretend this is spaced like in the poem. The spaces don't work in the author notes, just like on the author page...)
Oh, I forgot how much trouble this writing thing was!
Comments
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this does make sense.
i love it, it reminds me of someone i loved and alwys will
thank u for writing this.
it makes me want to cry -
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Thank you sweetheart, it means a lot that the words are powerful enough to evoke such feelings.
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