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Bang

 

 

 

I tried to get rid of all my bad habits

by putting a pistol to their heads.

 

But I could never pull the trigger.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

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  • EverxEnding silver member
    March 14, 2009
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    Wow. breath taking!

    [ pun intended ]


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    March 8, 2009
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    Great job


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    March 1, 2009

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    Awesome, gal. Succinct and with powerful word choice. Evocative title and lines that do not leave us wanting. excellent. you touched on something real to all readers!


  • DesolatELifE
    March 1, 2009

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    Bery nice idea.

    I meant 'very', but leaving it the way it is makes this whole comment a bit more interseting.


  • luna-midnight silver member
    March 1, 2009

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    hehe, i like where you went with this. not being able to get rid of bad habits. great job and thanks for entering. good luck
    Stephanie ♥


  • forbidden-colour
    March 1, 2009
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    Good job, a wonderful take on the prompt you were given! Good luck!! x

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