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Too Positive

I wish I were not so positive.
My smile can't help but continuously beam,
Leaving my cheeks stiff and tired.
To always think the best in a person is a fault,
For they are the ones that break you apart.
I only speak of happy things, and scold others who don't;
It is obvious how much those around me despise it so.
I'm just so positive that even in a tornado,
I've been known to smile blissfully.
If I were to be faced with death,
With a gun held right at my head,
I know that my simple answer would be,
"Well, at least it'll end quickly!"

Author notes

It's a delightful lies poem. Anyone who knows me KNOWS that it is. xD
This is for a school assignment. I had to pick something that I WASN'T, and then write about how I WAS just that. Interesting, no?
Yeah...-cough-
So...thoughts?

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  • Sweet write
    You can never be too positive!


    • jbbrandi
      May 6
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      LOL Possibly...but because it's a delightful lies poem, I'm going to have to be negative and say that you can be too positive. XD I love my can-do attitude! XD
      But thank you! : D