He took his life in his hands,
when his glands, saw his tiger.
The stripes sent him in a whirl
for this girl, he would ride her.
Carnal instincts dictated
lust was sated in the cage.
advances met by her growl
then a howl, as passions rage.
A squeeze on her soft tits
thrilled his bits, what a sinner!
His thrusts made her smile he thought,
but she sought him for dinner.
Author notes
Prompt: Courage and Pic supplied by host
A contest entry
- Adult Humor Pic Prompt # 3 by BluesMan.
1800 points, ended April 14, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice comparrison to the praying mantis mating habits, I wonder if she'll bite his head off first like the female praying mantis does? Great take on the PIC. Had me laughing Thank you for entering my contest.
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ha ha poor dog.. great job
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Good take on the prompt and the conclusion, sadly is appropriate!
Very Well Done and best of luck in the contest!
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Very nice write, dinner is served.
Best wishes in the contest
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I think this is a fine effort and you have used rhyme to good effect in an unconventional way. The beat (or should that be pulse) is strong.
One slight niggle to my mind though: In the final line shouldn't that be sought rather than sort?
Shame to spoil such a wonderful piece on the last lap.
Good luck in the contest.
Jim
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Arcgh thanks for spotting that Jim.
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haha so funny
have him for dinner
some dog chops I guess
Roses to you and Good Luck
Teresa
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A little preying mantis going on
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well if he had half a mind he'd be doing lots of praying
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