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3rd Meditation

I have grown wise
Through walking, breathing, observing
Upon a cushion
Cross legged, eyes closed
Smoke reaches the ceiling,
The smell of incense
Is ever pleasant
Music flows along the walls
The sound of shakuhachi
Is ever present
Counting. One. Two. Three. Four.
A double inhale. A double exhale
My hands lay pressed together
Palm to palm
I bow to all silent presences before me:

"Namaste"

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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 6

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    There is an inherent peacefulness residing within these serene words, dear Scribe. A chant of solace, a hymn of salvation. Well done, my Friend.



  • CrypticBard
    April 9
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    patchouli tendrils levitate
    bringing awareness
    into transcendent state


  • Presence
    March 27

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    You bring us there, blessed Poet.

    I touch your feet and bring a flower for you to find with waking eyes.

    I bow to all that you ARE.

    Namaste'


  • R.R. Lim
    March 13
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    A very excellent poetic description of the feelings during meditation. I do meditate from time to time when my schedule permits it, and I must say, it keeps me from going insane Great write. And thanks for the comment by the way.
    -Riche

    PS
    It's been quite awhile isn't it? How are you doing?

    • Lord Gegishov
      March 13
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      I am exquisite. Life is one continuous blessing, and I am satisfied with that. I can't believe you're 18 now. Time flies, I swear. How is life treating you? What are your plans for the future?

  • I love this! Meditation is a true way to "find yourself," & I find it ever-so soothing. There's an artist you should check into, who has done a painting entitled "Namaste." Alex Grey. If you already know about him, awesome.


  • Antipodi
    March 7
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    Meditation is a mind expanding exercise and you have described it very aptly poet

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