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Young children special
to those that love them always
never cause trouble

Laughter, sobs forever heard
throughout all their livelihoods

Author notes

I believe that is a tanka...

5 - 7 - 5 7 7

if I am mistaken let me know.

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    March 11

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    I love this piece so much. I dont know much about form poetry, because I have no clue how to write it, the syllables get me every time .. lol

    Excellent job with this

    good luck
    kat


  • daviscth silver member
    March 2

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    You did a wonderful job with the imagery in this piece Joann. Thank you for sharing your talent sweetie.


  • thejollytinker
    March 1

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    I know it's a tanka- and a FINE one!!! Thank you so much for entering- Jo, you kicked a little ass!!