I know nothing seems OK, and nothing seems alright
The sky it seems so dim the stars stopped being bright
But "When you've lost your hope,
When the sky is black;
Hold the memory of me close" and it will take you back.
Back to where our hope lived
Back when we felt alive
I'm sorry I'm not with you
I just couldn't survive.
I tried for too long, to make it through the night
Hold our memories too your heart you'll make it till its light
Author notes
Title:
"your blood smells of lustrous deciet.
Quote:
"When you've lost your hope, when the sky is black; hold the memory of me close."
BlackBloodyRose
I will use the quote 
sorry my poems are ot as good, I have block really bad
A contest entry
- All that's left are these pretty words. by Candy Morphine.
400 points, ended April 14, 2009, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think...truthfully
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ooo lol ur a finalist too
yay i love it...yet another dark write from you babe
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finalist=]
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Okay, whilst the language is not exactly intricate, where words lack the flow makes up for. It's been ages since i've read such a unbelievably flawless rythm as this. It was really enjoyable to mutter under my breath.=]
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thank you so much. that really made my night (and thts a big deal seeing as how there is snow today and im leaving for the beach) thank you so much
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