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Carved in the sand

Voice of you
within
ear shot of me.

Words carved in the sand,
days greeted by
orange and red sky's.
Hand in hand.

I know you had to say goodbye
it was my heart that didn't understand why.


I searched for that location
long after the winter passed
It was owned by the dark..
Blinded by dismay and recited plans.

Cashmere sweaters in a taped box..
Letters written..

 

Love in capital letters.

 

The
uninvited waves,
washed smooth any trace
of me and you.


Carved words washed out to sea
the oceans waves
pull their blanket
over me..
Tucking my shore from
seasons approaching.

Another thought,
another not to mention.

Author notes

Life and time have a connection unmistakable to
the heart.

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  • campanaro silver member
    March 14
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    Thank you

    I appreciate you stopping by.
    I'm glad you liked it as well.
    Thanks again.
    Take care
    Love Peace
    campanaro


  • Emmyb gold member
    March 14
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    a heart felt a beautifully written piece. well done

  • 1stplace in my view!

    The
    uninvited waves,
    washed smooth any trace
    of me and you.

     

    The ocean works it's waves over

    and through our very souls

    until we are it and it is us.

    And you, my friend, say it so very, very well.

    • campanaro silver member
      March 12
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      THANK YOU!

      I appreciate your kind and generous applause's.
      I'm grateful for you taking the time to read this and appreciate
      your insights as well.
      Thanks again.
      Take care
      As always
      Love Peace
      campanaro

  • "Another thought,
    another not to mention."

    A great way to end it, I love your style...

    Thankyou for entering LoveNeverDies,

    I enjoyed reading your piece,
    Goodluck


    (:



    • campanaro silver member
      March 3
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      Thanks so very much

      I appreciate your kind words.
      I'm very glad you liked it.
      Thanks again.
      Take care
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • Heroesrox
    March 3

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    Loved this part the most: "Carved words washed out to sea
    the oceans waves
    pull their blanket
    over me..
    Tucking my shore from
    seasons approaching"

    But all of it was loevly and brilliant.

  • How I love the ocean. Such a heartfelt write and great imagery. I love you and keep writing!


    • campanaro silver member
      March 3
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      Thank you

      Your kind as always
      Glad you liked it ..
      Thanks again:~)
      You say the nicest things.
      Love Peace
      campanaro

  • luv2dream gold member
    March 1
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    I really liked this "The
    uninvited waves,
    washed smooth any trace
    of me and you.
    Carved words washed out to sea
    the oceans waves
    pull their blanket
    over me..
    Tucking my shore from
    seasons approaching." these were my favorite lines!
    sad but also beautiful.

    • campanaro silver member
      March 1
      Edit | Reply

      Thanks so much!

      I really appreciate your very kind words.
      Thanks also for taking the time to read it.
      Take care
      Love Peace
      campanaro

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