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What I have Not

me eye is set on a golden pot
and a golden pot is what I've not
I've answered me riddle
played out on me fiddle
and now I'm in search for what I have not
I've searched the world
for this golden flower
clambering rainbows coloured bower
is there none whose finest hour
deserves this pot of golden shower
but here's a question for me to ask it
much less a pot then perhaps a basket
or even a bunch or perhaps a sprig
a glimmer would fair make me dance a jig
Begosh and begorrah kick me legs higher
me arms at me side oops me feet are on fire
quick fetch me the pot of which I have not
as to quench an ardour couldn't work any harder
I'm away to the land of forty green shades
in a wisp of smoke me silhoette fades
but before I go remember I've not
what I so desire but haven't got
rhymes with hot as in feet on fire
what'sa I hear before I expire
Oh I thought you said
but I clearly misheard
instead of gold t'was a different word
but never e' mind I'll dance with that
and as I bid goodbye I'll doff you me hat





Author notes

Happy St. Patricks Day x x penned also to celebrate my second aniversary on here today
1st March x x please see my wonderful background specially made for my 2nd anniversary by my dear friend Maralisa .. I so love it she is so talented x x
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5102853
a real treasured gift x x x and a lovely Mum to lovely Alisa xx

In celebration and to mark this, I would like to say that during my two years on here I have met some pretty amazing and incredible people
I have been and am truly blessed to know my dear sweet sister of my soul Karen who I love dearly and who is a wonderful poet and friend http://allpoetry.com/poem/4718837 she wrote this poem .. tears each time I read.
Tawk my dear sweet sis Theresa another beautiful soul
Daviscth my sister with a huge heart of gold
my sister Tender Wolf who writes the most evocative words
Dearest Wolfie, Roseangel, penman, patty, stavi, Prabhu, Wayne ....
My dear sister Elfin a wonderful poet dear, dear Val who always raises the broadest smile
Ian whose poetry melts me everytime and Melodies who is a magical being
so, so many incredible and wonderfully talented poets, some have come and gone sadly but their spirit will live on within me always x x x

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  • Emerald Lass
    January 22
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    HOODWINK

    Smiling because I love the theme of this poem and the ending really pleased me... the hat line is adorable!


  • tawk gold member
    August 14, 2009

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    "Weekend Hugs"

    Dear Sister what a beautiful and heartfelt and fun write! St. Patricks Day is very special for me as well I met my soul mate on line on March 17, 2002 and we are still so in love it is such a magical day. I am so happy that you joined ap and I was so blessed to cross your path, we are sisters of the soul and will always be. I hope you are doing well and you and your father are always in my thoughts and prayers. I miss you.

    Here is a big hug from me to the most wonderful sister in the world!!!!

    Love and hugs always,

    Theresa


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    March 31, 2009

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    this is so very irish!

    only you could pull it off this well. truly remarkable. i enjoyed reading this and it's never too late for st. patrick's day! karen


    • libithina
      April 10, 2009
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      Thankyou so, much my dearest, sweetest sister .. and No, it is never 'too late for St. Patricks' your special magic spreads in wonderful waves to me always s in abundance and s galore s s s s you always your sis Lib x x s

  • Edpeters
    March 16, 2009
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    GREAT write!

    I truly enjoyed reading it!

    Best,
    Ed


  • 2lullabyhaven
    March 2, 2009
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    And Irish it is and Irish it was, a pleasant 'dose' of Irish...smile

    • libithina
      March 17, 2009
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      Yay Happy St. PAtircks Day wishes for you dear Lullaby x x x


  • penman gold member
    March 2, 2009
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    Wonderful

    A very nice creation. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 2, 2009

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    A delightful little ditty my dear and to you I'm wishing a large pot of good cheer!

    Much love,
    mj.


    • libithina
      March 2, 2009
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      Oh to be sure that pot is a sight

      of cheers from you

      makes a day so bright



      lib xxx


  • ScottishPrincess silver member
    March 1, 2009

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    lol I love this,what a great limerick indeed
    Good luck in the contest to be sure to be sure lol,
    Hazel

    • libithina
      March 17, 2009
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      Oh to be sure today is the day Hazel Happy St. Patricks x x x

    • libithina
      March 2, 2009
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      Ahh 'tis makes a heart sing to be sure your words are gold lib xx


  • Melodies
    March 1, 2009
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    Oh, a darlin' poem for certain! Being Irish, I am granting you three wishes! You're bound to receive them all, in time. lol Love your poem, you can tell.


  • maralisa silver member
    March 1, 2009

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    a wonderful limeric I love your imagery and depth throughout I love your humor to lol its wonderful good luck in the contest maralisa


    • libithina
      March 1, 2009
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      heehehe thankee Maralisa is pots of luck and gold I'm sending ye both s Lib x x x

      thankyou once again for the wonderful beautiful background xxx I have celebrated my anniversary in style s


  • libithina
    March 1, 2009
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    is that a pot o' gold before me
    heehehee tha nks Cyn yes I am enjoying it and having fun two years have flown .. so glad you liked it I enjoyed writing it Much peace to you Cyn too
    s Lib x x x


  • Cynthia Gaines
    March 1, 2009

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    Wonderfully penned!!

    Firstly, have a Happy Anniversary!! And thank you for your humorous entry!! Best wishes to you in the contest!! Peace, xx Cyn

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    March 1, 2009

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    I think that this is cute I loved it is bought a smile thanks for sharing your heart and talent best to you in the contest much love.

    • libithina
      March 1, 2009
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      Sure I'm be roight gladdened to hear that

      Hugs n' love Lib x x


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    March 1, 2009

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    Ah, well done me little leprechaun, me thinks ye have a small touch of the Blarney Stone about ye! I loved it!


  • Remix Factory
    March 1, 2009

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    DIS WAS AWESOME !

    U CAN RHYME VERY WELL

    RF


    • libithina
      March 1, 2009
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      all the luck o' the Irish to ye dear friend magical wishes and thanx x x
      Hugsss Lib x x

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