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Eternal

Shines like the Sun
but for twenty-four hours,

keeping my smile warm.

 

When the frost gets overwhelming

when I'm left seeking life;

I Hold her twenty-four carat heart

and die.

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Golden
30 Words

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  • Meroza
    March 4
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    Well written