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Kissing Asphalt Onnce Again.(Triolet)

Kissing asphalt once again
Will I ever be a winner
Trying, failing, trying and then
Kissing asphalt once again
Seems there is no where or when
Will i always be a sinner
Kissing asphalt once again
Will I ever be a winner

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  • cirque du soleil
    March 6
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    Trying, failing, trying and then
    Kissing asphalt once again

    I like this...life seems hopeless at times. I'm impressed with the form.

    Thanks for the entry!

  • cirque du soleil
    March 1

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    umm..can you change? Sure, just remove this entry and enter another one...I won't comment till you decide, thoug for fairness' sake :-)