you came in late hours of the long day
when glare of sun had settled to gentler glow
and cooling skies held light as if to savor
lingering halos on the horizon
you were fresh as the morning I remember
when mists and dew made the world glisten
strong heat and warmth as high arc lingered
when we forget darkness, lose track of folded hours
soft as realization that parts passed by
were greater than curled roads ahead, towards
ends we feel but can never see; and
how love made everything stand still
you came
and once again I forgot the darkness
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This is gorgeous! I am sorry I didn't get to it in time! I hope you will read it somewhere around your town and let everyone hear your beauty.
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beautiful. Very nice. I like it.
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Simply love the build-up to the closing lines, PK - how very beautiful the light of love.. such an enlightening, heart-warming piece this is. Beautiful!
~ Nicolette
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I love the last line and the person that has this affect on someone. Very soft and pretty
Love,
Stacy
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and soft as the realization that parts passed by
were greater than curled roads ahead, towards
ends we feel but can never see; and
how love made everything stand still
you came
and once again I forgot the darkness
i loved this, your a good writer keep up the good workk! -
BEAUTIFUL!
Wonderfully written with a positive conclusion... "you came
and once again I forgot the darkness"
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