Oh God
often
the inference
lands to my rationality
that
you are
an eternal nature
while
I am
a momentary fellow
even then
we subsist
together living forever
though
I am not the
springy as you are
but it is you
which made me distinguished
precisely
when you preferred to be
my companion
Oh God...
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt: Scarecrow by amysticwriter.
1000 points, ended March 4, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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really good write
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it is you that made me distinguished precisely when you preferred to be my companion........
isn't that truly an awesome thought - that God wants to be our companion - our friend. Blessings my friend, blessings for this wonderful poem.
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I truly do love this write, as God chose us to be His companion, the Eternal God...How awesome...What an impact these last lines have for a closing statement of faith! Worthy of a trophy!
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Another great write by you! Keep up the brilliant work and BEST wishes to you! Thanks so very much for the great share!
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The proud scarecrow preforms a worthy job for the Almighty, by protecting the crops of the humble farmer...
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Lovely closeness with divinity here, I can feel it.
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Interesting isn't it, when one chooses us even though we are feeling undeserving? True companions look beyond the limits of our exterior and deeply into the eternal spark within. I like this one, my friend. I hope it does well in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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Awesome!
This is a wonderful take on the scarecrow, for we are so inferior to our Father Creator; yet, He loves us and should be our preferred companion and He certainly prefers us! This should win the GOLD, dearest friend.
Much luv & hugs, BonQ
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gorgeous and very creative my friend
such pure sincere words
God bless you my friend...
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