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Step Back

Drop the act, step back
through the cloud
of your own fake persona …

Make a decision to be real.
Jump through that fiery hoop
without that suit you ware so well.

A bad smell has consumed you.
Forever convincing yourself
that the veil is the truth of you.

It’s the undying proof that you
have lived a life of false smiles …

Now step back through the cloud;
reveal who you really are,
speak the truth, you will be set free 

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