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Disgruntled but not disguised

It’s all a mind fuck with you,
But the best I’ve ever had,
I’ll give you that,
And only that,
The rest doesn’t come easy.

I can’t be the one,
Letting you operate on me,
So breakable,
One harsh breath could change it all.

Too uncontrolled,
It’s unexplainable,
How you make me feel,
With every touch,
I scream for you.

I know you want it,
Don’t hold back,
Not now,
When I need you most,
Come back to me,
That’s all I ask.

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  • O' how accurate that opening verse is in this write always needing to savor every last morstle of that mind fuck until it consumes us to our very core and always having to have more until it has taken over control of that little bit of our self that use to make sense those mind fucks are so much hell they've become heaven

  • VERY NICE

    COOL SIS, very sweet and very well expressed. good work. i really like it.