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the wolves

hungry white wolves surround me
each lusting for my flesh

hunt me
chase me
taste me

tear my being from my chest

i want to end this pointless stand-off
the wolves have won the hunt

i don't have the strength to fight them
i know i'm the one they want

Author notes

this was a dream. it isn't finished yet. i'll add to it eventually, transform it into a story for you. stay tuned..

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  • Bob Fox
    July 1

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    Well

    These wolves you speak of. The two legged kind? For there are the true seekers of the flesh. But very interesting way of being devoured.


  • white stone
    June 15

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    this one is much better than mine. I entered what I thought was a contest about coffee for Matt, and I get:
    "Love is a dog from hell."
    This is cool.

  • wolfie, here boy, here boy, stop chasing the nice lady now, there's a good boy. sorry about that, he does like to frolic about in other's dreams. if i have told him once i have told him a thousand times, just chew the couch, but he always wants to cause some distress to others, still, he's fun once you get to know him. a good half finished poem.


  • hisaddiction
    March 14
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    wow you wrote this at 5 am....your this creative at 5 am....wtf?

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