something is holding
back my heart of life and
telling me no lie
its dark and light
but heard for me
to tell you that my heart
beats on when something
is holding on to it a black
dark mask of me is holding
me back from ever loving again
something with in a heart
Author notes
Prompt 1)
http://mrhide-patten.deviantart.com/art/Heartless-87560561
A contest entry
- Pick a picture (quicky) by Never.Give.Up.
900 points, ended March 31, 2009, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
something with in a heart
Comments
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I loved the imagery in this but I found it didn't really make sense to me
I wish you all the best in the contest.
Kate -
Great imagery. Loved the photo to this. Very deep and powerful words. Almost felt myself within the words.
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