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Love was seen today

Love was seen today
peeking around the shadows,
tugging at yesterday.

It was on your face.
It was sung in my heart,
it was holding you tight..
Saying good night to me.
Looking at the time..
For more.

It was feeling
all the reasons to stay..
Another day.

It was copying your smile
with gratitude.
It was memorizing the words you couldn't say.
With a look or melody of your voice.
A soft stare away,
from here.

I saw the hues of you,
in my days and nights.
In the sun and snow,
before me,
Or
Out of sight.
Love was seen today.

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People, love, life, how very precious it is.

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    March 28

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    Beautifully written! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. I'm honored to have you show your work here.


  • Samplette gold member
    March 15

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    A very pretty write. Filled with tenderness and love. I wish you the best in the contest. I enjoyed the read.
    Sam


    • campanaro silver member
      March 15
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      Thank you

      I appreciate the opportunity.Thank you very
      much for your kind thoughts.
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    March 8
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    Love was seen today, how beautifuly put, and all the magic of it.


    • campanaro silver member
      March 8
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      Thank you

      I'm glad you liked it:~)
      I appreciate you stopping by my friend.
      Best
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • Broken-Rickie
    March 3
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    So beautiful. Such an amazing write. Wanted to cry...


  • Denerica
    March 1
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    This is beautiful, I think it can even be a song. Just heartfelt loving words. Blessings.


    • campanaro silver member
      March 1
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      Thanks so much,

      I'm really glad you like it and
      your kind words,very
      appreciated.
      Best
      Love Peace
      campanaro

  • Just4u
    March 1

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    This is lovely. My fav lines are

    "It was copying your smile
    with gratitude."

    It amazing how very little it takes to actually make a bad day
    seem good once again...

    and

    "I saw the hues of you"

    This part is very lyrical and would work well into a song. I'll have to
    work on that...

    Well I'll have to see if I can get back to sleep. It won't be too long
    and the sun will be up. I wonder if it was because it was dark out
    that my new song ended up with on dark note...hmmmm

    I woke up from a very strange dream. Harrison Ford was my doctor
    and he prescribed pills which when opened turn into several eggs.
    Three of the eleven fell and ended up breaking. I'll really have to do
    a complete interreptation of that one when I wake back up...lol
    That reminds me, the lotto draw was last night, maybe that has
    something to do with it, perhaps I hit 3 numbers will have to check
    when I get back up, since eggs are a bit ball shaped...

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