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This Wall

My knuckles have become raw
From beating on this wall you've placed up

Is it really that bad
You tell me one little thing
And I say three little things
Now we're arguing

I think we're all confused
Because both our actions say one thing
But two different things are coming from me and you

I understand it
Can you
See I've been spotted the check mate
Three to Five to Six different ways

You just chose one

Don't think me down no
This ain't a frown

I apologize that I still want to get in
Under you skin
Deep, so deep that I'm in your blood
I guess I just got used to the attention
Cause I think I sorta like it

It's like a very close enemy
Lets see what friends we can't be

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