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Love's Ghost

Your ghost just lingers
An ominous form of torture
My mind never free
Your shadow stalks me
Your name mentioned
Causes me to disappear into ether
Why can't you just leave me be
Torn apart by your memory
Seething into dark rage
Your presence brings the stench of lies
I knew you would destroy my essence
Bringing down all I despise
Bleeding into my torture
Just leave

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  • estbelle gold member
    March 1, 2009
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    this is very dark and painful...love the ghost metaphor