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Sasori

please don't stare,
please don't juge me.
its not my fault I'm this way,
so please let me be.

in some ways
its good being like this.
my body never decays,
and i can live forever.

but in some ways,
it sucks being a puppet.
i feel no pain.
i just feel like a lousy muppet.

i hate it when
people call me barbie.
i hate it when
people pull my strings.

i may be a puppet,
but i have feelings too!
i may not cry,
but i can still laugh and...
die.

in memorie of my favorite naruto charater sasori, who died in battle.

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  • *glomp*

    amazing! you described sasori amazingly! i love your poems about naruto characters!!!!!!!


    • witefox
      March 2
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      u really like it? wow, and i thought all my poems sucked. well if u like it then i'm glad. i must be somewhat good at this. i really like ur poems too!!
      *smile*

  • witefox
    March 1
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    sasori might have been a puppet, but he didnt have any strings. and he was only half puppet.
    he was half human too.