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{.My Love.}

Black as night, silky as fur,

I lye in bed and I burn for her,

her sweet blue eyes and her silvery touch,

I have never longed for anyone this much.

With her porcelin skin and fine dark hair,

I would do anything for her, go anywhere.

Desire rages from the cockles of my heart,

Her carved face an angels art.

Her skin as white as a pearly dove,

If only I had confessed to her my love.

Now I wait to see her flashing smile,

but for now my emotions are pressed away into a concealed file.

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Hi there! I hope you enjoyed reading this! It just kind of came to me which is a bit weird considering im not used to writing poetry.

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  • MsAlee
    June 3
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    Wow very pretty and well written!


  • karma-n-peace
    March 1

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    I did enjoy it, thanx

    Desire rages from the cockles of my heart,
    Her carved face an angels art.

    I love this line the most.