Chew on these words -
I hate you
Swallow them
the words digest
you can only think of me
as I ponder about you
we both vomit
neither of us move on
we are chained to a
sickness
caused by....
broken
promises
Author notes
Pic Credit -
http://redsigns.deviantart.com/art/Hellbound-103936027
A contest entry
- A Dark Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended March 5, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Gorgeous! Congrats on the trophy. You deserve it!
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Gosh I loved this, it was so powerful. Amazing.
All the best in the contest.
Take care
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Great take on this image prompt. And it's so very true too. Hate spoken,is a very personal confrontation. It does in fact pull us up short and fast to question why and demand an answer. If not an apology outright.Strong message here.
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a very deep and powerful take on the image good luck in the contestmaralisa
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i would hate to be the person this is directed towards
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Wonderful work here my friend!
Great thoughts for this contest prompt.
Good luck to you here and I love your
background!
Jeremy0826
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Oh wow. Excellent take on the prompt. I love what you've come up with.
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wow there chica! talk about deep hurt. i wish u luck.
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