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Starvation

I'd rather die
than eat those -
as savory as curry nor as sweet as pie,
cause you see, I am fat, I suppose.

Don't make me eat it,
no I won't,
cause if I do, my tummy would split,
so stop persuading, please don't.

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I didn't expect that prompt, so I guess this is all I could do... though I really hope that you'll like it...

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  • miss-princess
    March 2

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    okay hmmm... i want you to write a poem on eating disorders. Anything wat so ever about them. Have fun good luck