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Le Petit Poison

Born in a fire of naked love
Pleasure spasm arch
Sent on a journey
In the apex
so...
Swim my little fishes
As fast as you can
She waits for you
Only one will succeed
which one will it be
A dangerous journey
Many exhausted on the way
some miss the mark
One breaks through
Safe in the shelter...
Of new life begin

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  • sheltered gold member
    March 5, 2009
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    lol...
    while the fairy bunny
    eats her eggs
    on the sunny side


  • estbelle gold member
    March 1, 2009

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    feisty

    mmmokay only one le poison indeed,so many fishes in the sea this made me smile, best of luck in the contest