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The Questions of Life

Am I really weird
Or is it you?

If I'm really crazy
You must be too

If I really love you
Will you love me too?

If I'm your true friend
Will you be mine?

If I say I tell the truth
Is that a lie?

If you live forever
Will I die?

If you're on your own
Are you really free?

If you ask for help
Is it a plea?

If you know the answers
Is it a key?

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These are the questions of life

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  • No. The questions of life are, "How much is that watermelon?" or "Where are the car keys?" and stuff like that. Good try though.


  • daviscth silver member
    May 11

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    I enjoyed reading this very much. Maybe you should use this for your own contest. Thanks for this entry.

  • You have done sooo well here, I LOVED the read
    Ticks all the boxes
    Thankyou for your entry


  • Ms.Daydream
    March 1
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    Wow, interesting questions! And all rhyming! Great one! =D