My fate is recognize your spirit
Through the time and the infinite.
Its flight in the air appeared to me.
The taste of the life contemporize,
Amate reliable souls in the earth
Temporary union in the different
Alive forms awaked in the perishable
Organic body shaped in the mind.
Gods encourage alliance of the Earth
Rules and the eternal existence in the
Infinite space for no any reason.
Your choice is me; that’s what explains
The love philosophy, you always knew –
Love union of souls have made in Heaven.
The roads cross on the sky and bring
Me to you as an eternal gift of the life and love.
Author notes
Quote is a prompt:
"The most powerful force on earth is the human soul on fire." - Unknown
A contest entry
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How do you explane love? Do you believe in fate?
Comments
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Very well penned!
Thanks for entering...best wishes always!
Write on!
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i remember some books by my favorite fiction writer that explored the idea of this kind of spiritual closeness, so this is interesting to see it in a poem...very creative, well done for the contest idea... very well done...PK
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Love this. This is so me. This is just my kind of poetry all around. Definetly affected me. Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy amazing. =) I love when people do that--- when they write amazing things. Write on and good luck.
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i loved the way u put across ur emotions here...it's powerful love,flawless and beautiful...but i feel it doesn't fit the prompt of my contest..
anyways good luck
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How pretty! I like this poem a lot, although I noticed a lot of subject-verb disagreement throughout. However, your imagery and diction are superb and you got the emotion across really, really well. Good poem and good luck!!
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wow that prompt is really deep just as your poem is. you are a very gifted writer. keep up the excellent job.
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It's nice to see appreciation of the friends.
Thanks for comment.
Hope to see you again on my page
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I like the depth of this piece. Your word usage is terrific.
Great take on the prompt -
Your style is very much similar to my liking and the way I write. Abstract in a way possible to describe, the ethereal, not understood by many, but hey, liked it.
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I knew you'll like it.
There are just my thoughts in the poetic form. I'm trying to be realistic and not too much abstract. The real life is very different then what I describe in the poem.
Thanks for comment
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Yes, I do believe in fate and this write explains it well, or at least the best it can be explained.
I love the metaphors, you really gave this a kick of spiritualality.
Your choice is me; that’s what explains
The love philosophy, you always knew –
This line had the most profound effect on my feelings as I read through it, it's like the discovery of the answer...so clear.
Great write and good luck in the contest.
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That's great to see you on my page again.
Thank you for your wonderful comment
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